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Read the short paragraph “Old Times vs. New Times”. It is written using only Simple Sentences (choppy and boring).
Your Task: Rewrite the paragraph. Combine the sentences to use Compound and Complex structures. Use connectors like and, but, so, because, although.
Original Text (Boring):
Old Times vs. New Times
In the past, men worked outside. Women stayed at home. This was the rule. Now, things are different. Women have careers. Men help with children. Life is expensive. Both parents need to work. Equality is good. It makes families stronger.
Rewrite the Paragraph Here (Better Variety):
(Try to combine sentences to make it flow better).
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